Thursday, December 18, 2008

song/poem

this is a poem i wrote that my guyfriend carlos is going to turn in to a song, hes plays the gutar and sings,

You turned my black rose red
Then turned it back to black
pulled my petals out
Tearing away my heart
Spilting it in two
I never want to feel pain like that
Its not an easy thing to do

Its not your fault at all
Don’t blame your self for this
Its my fault for trusting you
I let the love blind me
Slowly carry me away
I was in a blissful happiness
Until you went and broke it in two

Im left here with a hole in my heart
Waiting for it to heal
Hopeing the pain will fade; slowly drift away
You betrayed your best friend
Your one true love
And for that I bid you good bye

4 comments:

Capri Amier Amour said...

that's....deep.

Charli Henley said...

Hi.... I randomly found your blog today and I wanted to drop you a little line.

I like your poems.

(I also like vampires.)

Nice to meet you!

(You should add a "Follow This Blog" thingy on here so people like me can follow you! (Let me know if you do!)

Unknown said...

that poem is awesome!!

Opaque said...

Deep!!! I really liked this one!!!