Monday, June 15, 2009

ಥಿ ಚೋಇಚೆ

a gental breeze
blows through the trees
a river full
woth moonlit water
rain filled clouds
cover the sky
breaking open
lighting dances
thunder plays
both far and near
rain kisses the cheak
then full on poors
all animals in hidding
not one sound
in the crispy air
breath is seen
slowly things part
sun breaks trough
noices are heard
its the calm
right before
everything goes wrong

this might be the last poem for a while. summer is very busy and i dont have much free tiem but ill try to post somemore.
let me know what you think.

1 comments:

Opaque said...

Apart from the typos and misspellings, I loved the imagery! Keep writing!!!

PS: You've used an Indian regional language. Nice touch!