this is a nother poem, unnamed yet again
tell me what you think
and what i should call it
a shadow in the dark
a hidden figure in plain sight
a quite person sits there
never saying a thing
no one ever sees them
unseen they is
very bright they may be
but that no one knows
for no one knows them
for they are never seen
for they are never heard
an out cast; a loner
friends they have none
if they died would you cry a river?
or even shed a single tear?
school year
14 years ago
2 comments:
That's really good
I think you should call it either "Hidden" or "Shrouded By The Dark"
or maybe "Quiet, Alone, and Forgotten"
This is really good!!! Umm, I think I can add to violet~reflection's comment. "Hidden" and "Shrouded by the dark" make a good and suitable title.
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