Sunday, February 1, 2009

miss mary mack

ok this is a song/poem that i got out of a book, white is for magic. its part of the blue is for nightmares series, which is a great series.

it may be a little twisted but when you read the book it makes sence


miss mary mack mack mack, all dressed in black black black.
she has a knife knife knife, stuck in her back back back.
she cannot breathe breathe breathe.
she cannot cry cry cry.
thats why she begs begs begs.
she begs to die die die.

6 comments:

Sugar Loving Otaku said...

cool.

Ravens Wings said...

nice poem.

isnt that a little depressing though 4 kids?

Opaque said...

The repetition resonates in the mind. Nice one!!!

Cynthia said...

yikes...begs the question, why
does she wish to die?

Blue Rose said...

i didnt write it its from this really good book, white is for magic by laurie stlarz. its hard to explain, you need to read the book to get it.

violet~reflection said...

I took this idea and made my own version:
Miss Mary Mack, Mack, Mack
All dressed in black, black, black.
A silver knife, knife, knife.
Stuck in her back, back, back.

Straining to breathe, breathe, breathe
She tries to cry, cry, cry.
She slowly begs, begs, begs.
She begs to die, die, die.

Her clothes are wet, wet, wet.
They're drenched with blood, blood, blood.
She looks to the sky, sky, sky.
Remembers all she loves, loves, loves.

She falls to her knees, knees, knees.
Blood coats the floor, floor, floor.
With one last tear, tear, tear.
She is no more, more, more.