Tuesday, March 31, 2009

the childhood

the childhood memories
there calling to you
wanting to take you back
wanting you to rember
but the past is to far forgotten

meant to stay that way
but can they forever?
the past should be forgotten
but it will still call

your childhood is calling,
will you answer?
or ignore the call?
all it wants is a moment of your time.
but will that hurt the presant?



this poem isnt done yet, this is the 1st copy and im going to redo it later

tell me what yoiu think so far

1 comments:

Opaque said...

Other than the typos and grammatical errors, the idea is fine. Keep writing!!!