oddly this poem has a name
what do you think?
lost
with one last tear
its all gone
with one last breath
one last word
with that last word
all is said
goodbye is here
blackness to come forever
wishing it where no more
knowing that wish is already lost
same poem just new name
school year
14 years ago
2 comments:
The title is quite suitable. Alternatively, I would call it "Lost".
Coming to the poem - short and strong!!!
The poem moved me completely...and nothing could have summed its effect than the title "Lost"...short but quite strong and moving!!Keep writing!!
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