Tuesday, March 31, 2009

glass rose

glass rose
beutiful,
frigile; about to break
deadly to hold to close
to loose and it gone
one wish its set upon
kiss will keep it safe
the light shinnes; a thousand dimonds
shinning bright; keeps it calm
whisper to it
no harm shall come
a gental touch and it might break
set upon it that one kiss
and hope its not a miss

hope you liked it. tell me what you think.

1 comments:

Opaque said...

I like the analogy. It is brilliant. Replacing it with say love or any form of relationship for that matter shall help understanding this post.

"whisper to it
no harm shall come
a gental touch and it might break"

You can be honest, but do not cross the line and be rude to break her heart.

This is what I think - it is brilliant!!!

Keep writing!!!