i posted a poem close to this a while back but i went back and reread it and decided i didnt work right and that this version is much better
tell me whatch ya think
a lass stits upon a tree
looking down at the mortals be
watching, waiting for her chance
a chance for what you ask your self,
that is a mystery on its own
one that shall be unknown
school year
14 years ago
4 comments:
Interesting!!! You've got me thinking. I feel there is an underlying message there which is quite intriguing.
Umm, but this line, is this right? -
"one that shall me unknown"
I am just confirming if it is a typo or not.
Keep writing!!!
sorry that was a typo, but its fixed now
Oh, okay. This is well-written!!!
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Congratulations on the award Black Rose. I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for checking out my site as well. : )
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