Thursday, April 2, 2009

what your about to read is not a suicide poem. its about a girl who is truly sad.


the tears decend down her face
like there in a race
the tears stream down
shes about to drown
her sadness is a waste
crying for an already lost cause
to tired to care
she begins ot stare
as the tears get harder
her sadness gets stronger
can she hold on any longer?
her lonliness get bigger
sadness is the trigger
her grip is slipping
her eyes are stinging
will this be the end?

whatch ya think?

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

I really like this. I know that feeling, it is like utter despair. Thankfully, it usually passes.

Jillian said...

I agree, it shows a lot of passion. Really good!